Really nice work on this one, I think it hits all too close to home for many. How many people have thought to themselves they wish they could live their life without the contraints binding them.. Far too many I imagine.
Love these lines ...
"If I could change things for the better, I'd do here and now,
I'll make life better for my wife and kids, if someone just tells me how."
Another very enjoyable poem to read bro, glad it's in the contest (sets the bar nice and high for the others)