I know from where it is coming. I feel sad and i feel helpless but i also feel blessed to have witness such pure love in this world. You poems come from your true heart and thats where they struck me.

Great write love.
Thanks for sharing.

all the best and take care

Dear Cindy,

Goosebumps all over when I read this....
So beautiful and I know why you wrote it.
But we need you too, Cin. Please stay with us for as long as you can.

Love,

5/5 Ingrid

Cindy, such a very sad piece but so beautifully written. Though some of our loved ones may not be with us, they will always be with us in our hearts.

Love and hugs,

Steve

I love the way you wrote this, very deep. Keep up the work.

Cindy this is beautiful....the repetition of the first line in each stanza gives it a haunting melodic quality. All the sadness and emotion emanates from each line.

Cold and gray is the stone
That sits upon the hill
Waiting for lovers to reunite
As destinies fulfilled

^ perfect ending....with a hint of hope without being morose. Bravo! Love, Debbie

Lovely feelings. and poem. great job

That was so sad and touching. I'm feel blessed to have read this. 5/5

Cindy this was so sad and yet it is so beautiful how powerful your love is. Very inspiring.

Surspisingly, u made stone sound good, loves ever words

This is so sad!! Your flow is excellent and the imagery paints a painful picture.

Cindy,
I can't express how this made me feel. I cried upon reading it the first two times, came back later and read it a third time. At first there were extremely sad feelings of knowing that we are forced to live this life without the love of our life beside us. Then the third time I read it I felt a peace, because eternity is a lot longer than a lifetime. When our (destiny of joining our loved one is fulfilled it will be ever so worth the wait. No more pain, no sickness, and only the pure love magnified in it's greatness that it was on earth will be even more great in Heaven.
Such a disturbingly beautiful write. My thoughts and prayers are always with you.
Kay

Tis another great poem cindy, love the flow and grammer, i give it a 5/5!!! keep them coming!!!

Cindy evertime i read your poetry and am filled with great compassion and emotions that cannot be explained, you are an inspiration for people to continue and live on in happiness. xox sam

When you know a poem has been written from the bottom of someones heart you feel it in your heart too. You are a person who represents strength in their poetry and clearly as a person. I hope you never lose that.

Take Care.

Cindy,my dear another heart rendering poem.5/5.An insight to your soul.Great work.Take care.

Great poem!
The repetition of *Cold and gray is the stone*
really gave this poem a nice flow...

great job..

.:HammY:.

Nothing is lost Cindy...... everthing is numbered like every leaf that falls , like every grain of sand........

Barry

Nothing is lost Cindy....like every leaf that falls, like every grain of sand.....

beautiful poem ..... although sad