Comments : My Promise to You

  • 16 years ago

    by Nigel Oliver

    I loved this poem >.<

    "If you come and be my love,
    I'll quiet down and be your dove.
    I'd represent everything good,
    If only you come and love me as only you could. "
    ^favorite stanza :D

    keep it up

  • 16 years ago

    by Blissful

    I liked how you expressed your emotions here but the poem did not flow well.

    "I am will you show you all."
    ^I don't get it..

    Overall .. good job *4/5*

  • 16 years ago

    by JustKristina

    Great work! lovely poem full of emotion and feelings! i love it!! keep up the great work! ;D

  • 16 years ago

    by HaileyHelen

    Hehe it was great! tell me if u ever want sumthing commented cuz i will!