I like the idea for this piece a lot. it's very sweet and romantic. the only thing I don't like is the slang way you say your line, "I can't write no love poems" i would put it like " I can't write a love poem" or "I can't write any love poems" because that's a little more grammatically correct and sounds better to me, but in the end, that's just my opinion, and whether or not you use it, you still have a beautiful piece!
*ME*