Good morning ladies and gents it's a brand new day

the conjuction is missing after the word gent

the word "i" should be I at places that have been missed

I loved the poem
Definitely loved it
cos of the fact that it coincides with my inner thoughts about the bigger meaning of life and moving on after making some hard decisions
5/5 cos of the feel though it has some structural deformities but hey its nothing in front of a good poem

I suggest you to wotk on this topic and GIVE ME MOre

take care,
Roxiee

'My world tour starts here i cant wait
And I will achieve greatness so remember this date,

Hey you:)
This great, i love this, i think very different from your other pieces. Its got a positive spin on it.
I really liked the end, made me sit up and take notice.
I do think this is one if your best pieces.
Take care

Kelly
xx

This was really good =]
I enjoyed reading it! 5/5