This is really good...... particularly the last stanza....... loved the whole poem....

5/5

Debbie,

The last stanza stands out.. It is so poetic... lol. A very philosophical poem...I loved it.

Take care,

5/5 Ingrid

Debbie
This is realy beautiful. I love the imagery and the vision it creates for the minds eye.

In my wild abandon
I sow my scattered seeds
Hoping for a meadow
I overlook the weeds

This stanza just really touched me so deeply.
Excellent job!
Love Cindy

Until the end of time
Through cycles of rebirth
I'll plant again my flowers
Then pluck them from the earth

The simplicity behind the poem and the idea of it was what made me really enjoy it. I especially liked the last stanza, beautifully written.

That was really sweet! Everything in it shows eternal love. 5/5

What a lovely poem and so sweetly wrote, great piece my dear xox sam

Well, I guess the whole thing must be a metaphor. This is in the "Love" section, therefore I guess what you have been sowing is your love, yet never to reap the return.

I may be reading too much into this poem, but it soo seems to be about your love ..

"Hoping for a meadow
I overlook the weed"
Hoping for true love you look past a persons bad qualities.

As I say, I think I might be reading too much into this poem though.

It is beautifully written, it flows so simply from one line to the next with an air of complete grace. Really nice use of imagery here, beautiful images of flowers, fields, spring time (all things nice).

As always a pleasure to read.

~Pete.

Such a elegant yet powerful.. not to mention inspiring piece of writing. Grats Deb :)

I loved it, it was different. i thought it was awesome. 5*5
Kimberly

A very beautiful poem which flowed so well. I loved the ending too.

This is a truely amazinggg poem. I just joined this site today and it's people like you, with their flawless deep writing, that made me want to join. It is AMAZING and so figurative, i love it =).

I love this poem. It speaks to me metaphorically as well. Another flawlessly structured piece with vivid imagery, impeccable flow that is creatively put together. This is one of my favorites!

Wow I liked this. It is obvious that your words provide the nutrients for a poets pen like the sky provides the blue for the clouds. . I enjoyed your poem and the thoughts that came to visit the page before me. Keep up the good writes I look forward to reading more of your works. Peace.