Its a good start to a poem.
if u spaced it better,and after each comma or period started a new line it would be even
better!
i like it alot though:)
keep up your writing!

Thanks a lot for commenting my poem i'll try my best to do as you wish.later!!

Thanks a lot for commenting my poem i'll try my best to do as you wish.later!!

Even though that was short i still enjoyed reading it good job keep it up 5/5 '
kasia

I like it! its a nice flowwwww. =]]

Awww this poem is so sweet i like the last sentece of it it is just soo cute and sweet xxxx

Awww this is so sweet your good with words and your a good writer! you should comment my poems

I liked it...but it could be alot better use spaces and commas and peroids...its a good start

This is pretty good poem. i enjoyed it

Lol like the ending
nice poem

xx

Simple nice poem...love is amazing