I really like this poem.....things aren't what they seem n that sucks
Good job
~KISSES~

Awesome poem! i totally no how this feels...i had my exboyfriend who i thought was the one and he pulled a stunt on me and said nope sorry ur done. but it takes time and effort and pain to get over it to get the best out of things!! great job!
amanda

Great poem. I wish that guys would be sincere more often, I hate how they can lie and feel no remorse. 5/5

"Guess it true that things
really aren't what they seem.
She thought he was "the one",
But he was the one to crush her dreams."

I fell in love w/ this poem..it is so relatable & the emotions were so vivid & raw..great write!

Brooke<3

Aww that sucks. You finally think they are the right one and yeah they screw u over. Well written poem. 5/5
-vino

I love the subject of the poem. it felt so real to read, very raw and frank. honesty is a powerful tool when it comes to writing, so keep up the goood work

Good flow, especially liked the final verse

Brilliant
Amazing
I Can Relate
5/5
loves ;; x