Wow. I'm speechless. This is an incredible piece, such amazing imagery and vivd description, I feel like I'm there, it's beautiful.

If you're not in a poetry club, join one. This amazing talent needs to be recognised!!

This gets a five from me, it's incredible. I would suggest just editing out the strange characters on the last line and replacing them with an apostrophe.

5/5 *claps*

Keep writing,
Emily :)