Comments : Chained is my soul (Lento)

  • 16 years ago

    by Elapsed

    This is such a cute piece, loved the expression of craving/longing throughout this poem.. great job

  • 16 years ago

    by geeeeee

    Wishing to hold you so near
    Singing my sweet chant of love
    Reaching out for you in my dreams
    longing for you, my sweet turtle dove

    I agree, this is a cute poem. Everybody longs and dreams of being with people that they love. Sometimes we get lucky and it all comes true:) A really nice poem.

    Take Care.

  • 16 years ago

    by Bill Turner

    Beautifully penned....what wonderful sentiments. Anyone would love to be the object of such emotion.

  • 16 years ago

    by David

    Wishing to hold you so near
    Singing my sweet chant of love
    Reaching out for you in my dreams
    longing for you, my sweet turtle dove

    fav lines, you so totally rock! 5/5 david