Makaveli
This is an awesome piece you have penned. What a wonderful job you have done on this difficult form. The tragedies of war and the devastation it leaves behind is heartbreaking. Great imagery and word choices.
~Bravo~
Take Care Cindy

Indeed BRAVO! This form is way too difficult for me, but you made an outstanding poem using it!

Take care,

5/5 Ingrid

You've done an excellent job on this very difficult form. The piece flows well, follows along along with no loss of direction. No part of it seems forced or out of place.

I love the title....goes right along with one of my favorite sayings " a hard head is a empty mind".............you've written a perfect poetic definition of intolerance....in a very difficult form....well done! Take care, Debbie

Hi great work.

Hey, this is really cool the way you flipped it around! Great job!

Wonderful piece! 5/5