Comments : Bleeding Mascara

  • 16 years ago

    by Roxiee An

    Too dark for me
    lol

    its nice, kinda gived me a view of dark night, streets, a girl walking

    I dint get the meaning of the line --- nothing but skins and bones
    plz pm me explaining the metaphorical meaning

    I really love the darkeness of last stanza

    5/5

    keep it up and take care,
    Roxiee

  • 16 years ago

    by Midnight Sun

    Empty, jagged streets -- she continues to roam.
    Incredible imagry there!!! As soon as I read it I got the picture being portrayed only through feeling before. That was beautiful! Truly stunning piece and yet the truth behind it is so sad.
    ~Midnight Sun