Comments : Eternally Devoured (Ottava Rima)

  • 16 years ago

    by cowgirlstar26

    It's been a pleasure dancing with you, bows out. Great poem, I liked your choice of words, and I was never bored which tends to happen to me a lot. I'm gonna have to try to write my own poem in this style, it's different :)

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Wow...
    This is so wonderful, absolutely amazing from the beginning to the end. Every line is great, and I am deeply touched.
    I like a lot the imagery that you weaved here, along with such original expression of emotions.
    Great job!

    P.s- Thanks for the dance :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Timothy r

    I am in awe of anyone who can write this type of form. It flows tremendosly and isn`t forced at all. I would bow to you, but would hit my head on my desk, so I am giving you the a-o.k. sign, this was brilliantly done. Tim