Comments : Dances for Me

  • 16 years ago

    by Nigel Oliver

    I loved this poem... it was lovely.
    I feel this way a lot XD

    The way you expressed how you felt was beautiful..
    And the rhyming scheme was flawless.
    I loved the emotion in this poem.

    Nicely penned
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Blissful

    Beautiful love poem! I loved the emotions you described because the warmed my heart and made me think about my loved one. The title was attention grabbing and overall the poem was a joy to read.

    "The simple glance
    Of your hazel eyes
    Touches my heart
    As it freely flies."
    ^wonderfully said!

    Well done . *5/5*

  • 16 years ago

    by MeltInHisArms

    I like, i don't see any reason 2 change it, it's a very passion-filled poem and i can relate 2 every word! 5/5
    xoxo
    ~waiting~