I like the style of this one. it is different from most of your others. i like the step you took. i feel like it all fits. those are stylistic notes. content wise, that is so sad. it hits deeps. i know the controlling parents and the need to escape. i know the want to just leave, permanently. i understand that so this hit deep. congrats again on a wonderful poem!

Aww thats sad but waaaay good!!! I can relate tho which sux but I like it ^^!

Alliey

Damn...ahmazing i love it.

Wow, that was really good.
5/5 for me!

Nice imagery thanks for the comment and to answer your question the temptation is trust

I love this on because I can really relate to every thing the poem says

Really good job i really like this probley cuz i can relate very much...i think everyone wants the sence of freedom i know i do...i feel like im traped and can't get out to move on but some how i still manage on good job like this lots 5/5

Tis was cool, though i think it was strongest towards the end. i liked this alot.

--TheGothicAlbino

Wow, beautiful poems, i can't decide which one is my favorite. but i really like (my queen). anyway keep loving-for love is truth..peace

Wow this is very well writen i love it. Lisening to parents really sucks. im 18 and i still have to lisen to them complain and tell me what to do everyday and i really hate it. but i live on. just can't wait to leave. try to find something that can relaxe you lisen to music or somethin. hope all goes well 5/5