I wake one night, frightful and cold.
Too lonely i[[capitalize the I]] feel in this world.
What happened to the days that
you were by my side?

I miss the ways you'd hold me tight
.Do hear me now?
Do you see my fears?
I feel like dying because of all your lies,

And the shine and sparkle
I see in your eyes,
Since, your[[you're>>> it means you are.]] not mine now
I Silently Cry.-

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Okay, I love this poem.
You have great talent, darling.
I think they all just need editing and a few tweaks with the way it's put out to help the flow and neatness of it.

You're an amazing writer.
5.5