It's beautiful and it really goes straight to the heart of the matter. 5/5 I love it.

Very beautiful and I'm amazed with your imagery. Well written and you deserve 5/5!!!

Wow.....very strong emotions! its very heartfelt and i can relate though! u had really expressed all those great words! very impressive poem u know how u starts the line up the the end.. its a bit sad and i can feel that but it was sweet love piece! nice message 5/5

Wow...
i wasn't expecting it to end like that...
this is straight to the point, but yet so heartbreaking...
awesome, absolutely =)
*keep going*
isabel

Whoa.........
That was so shocking.....
I found my mouth hanging open when I read the ending. This poem kept my interest all through out and I don't think it could be written any better.

Great poem all the way!
Keep it up!
I loved it!
5/5