OO I like it. It sounds liek a Halloween poem

I like it 5/5!!!
keep it up

Very good poem, I could almost feel everything [That is if I wasn't already COLD x_x]

I love free style poetry, too bad when I write freestyle I go into OCD and end up writing a story or making it Rhyme.

Nice.
I'm a deep Death poet myself! Keep up your writing! I love it!
5/5
~ally

Wow. i really like it. great job. it was very... cold... for lack of a better word... i loved it. 5/5. great job. keep it up!

yours always
oxoxLIKETHEWINDxoxo

This is a really good poem i really enjoyed reading it. 5/5
kasia

WOW... kinda creepy but very cool. definate 5/5