Very good

How sweet, it was much sweeter in text but writen down also shows how much you like/love this person.

right?

5/5 david

Well David, you of all people should know how much i love this person ;) thanks for your comments

Good Good, 4/5

"Do I have to rip out my heart
And send it to you
Just to make you see?"

that is one strong stanza! =O this poem really makes me see you really love this person, so that's good =] Sorry 'bout the short comment.
5/5
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