Nitin
What a sad and yet beautiful poem.

Feeling roses for the first time
Like a child lying on sand
Feeling love for the first time
With the touch of your hand

Feelings of the wonderment and joy of the first feelings of love. what a fantastic stanza.

If i could rise from my grave
Scream my hidden feelings
Only if i could ever rewind
And taste my own healing

Just the thought of being able to go back and fix things that are wrong. This piece made me smile and made me cry. Excellent word choices and Imagery were put into this piece. Your writing is always so unique.
~Bravo~
Love Cindy

All i can say is it reaaly went deep , and brought back my own memories and supressed feelings, so strong were your words,amazing poem. so well penned and meaningful.

Take care
chavii.

Dear Nitin

it's been so long since I read your work. I have missed so much that has happened on the site; your poem brings on a rush of memories.

your words carry so much power in them, that they have the ability to make me cry and smile at the same time. remarkable piece of work.

peace and luck
shobhana

I love this poem. i can toally relate to this poem.

This a beautifully sad write from you Nitin. I love all the feelings these words invoke. From the breathtaking opening with childhood, roses and pictures of a warm beach:

"Feeling roses for the first time
Like a child lying on sand
Feeling love for the first time
With the touch of your hand"

^ this is touching....brings back childhood memories of a first love, innocence and heart's soaring to heights of new emotions.

You take the reader on a journey through love, betrayal and loss in a few well crafted verses that are impeccably rhymed .

Awesome write my friend....so good to see a solo effort....Bravo! Take care, Cindy

This a beautifully sad write from you Nitin. I love all the feelings these words invoke. From the breathtaking opening with childhood, roses and pictures of a warm beach:

"Feeling roses for the first time
Like a child lying on sand
Feeling love for the first time
With the touch of your hand"

^ this is touching....brings back childhood memories of a first love, innocence and heart's soaring to heights of new emotions.

You take the reader on a journey through love, betrayal and loss in a few well crafted verses that are impeccably rhymed .

Awesome write my friend....so good to see a solo effort....Bravo! Take care, Debbie

Thats a great piece well written and your words are placed perfectly, great job. xox sam

This poem brought back some painful memories for me...

but it was amazingly written...

=]

5/5
.:Hammy:.

This is and beautiful poem, u are talented... keep it up!

Nitin...this is really nice, very great piece dear
I thought it was an absolute love poem, so I loved the contradictory in it =]

very nice one, god it feels so good reading your poems..you so much remind me of the old P&Q good days :(
keep it up
Best of luck xxx

This is Very well written, i lyk the emotion and the flow of the poem nice job...=]

Wow.. Beautifuly written! 5\5 for sure.

Hi Nitin

how r u???????? i know i hav visited after a long time....
but really ur poems made me recall those days wen i used to write poems..... again m speechless as b4...i always aprreciate ur poems...
and this 1 is too gud....

ab soch rahi hoon main bhi fir se start kar doon poems likhna.....hehehehe

A great write my friend. it is very touching. nice flow. a 5/5 from me. all the best of wishes ben thompson

"Feeling roses for the first time
Like a child lying on sand
Feeling love for the first time
With the touch of your hand"

Those lines were the most impressive. You expressed plenty of love and feeling here and it made the rest of the poem flow so smoothly. 5/5

Touching poem very well written xx