O_o. Wow.
This was absolutely stunning. :D Everything was... wow. - I love it. <3 The flow was flawless, the imagery was great (especially in the 1st stanza), the vocab was beautiful... and overall, it was just fabulous. :) Overall: 5.5

-- Stephanie Lynn .+.

I really like the flow and your imagery. This was really great and deserve 5!!!

The flow was amazing..
It was a very deep piece.
Your imagery worked really well
It was a quite nice a dark poem...

i really liked.
5/5

Great write, :-) not as dark as the title made it sound but that's fine, thanks for taking time to read my poem, take it easy and keep writing!