This is very emotional and flows well. There's a spelling error in the next to last line and a few places that could use a comma but other than that it's awesome 5/5

I think everybody can relate to the whole trust thing, it's hard for even me to trust people, especially somebody I love. There will always be that fear of getting your heart broken, but it's better then not loving at all. 5/5 GG23

That "she" used to be me. Hurtful times all i remember were tears ....and blood...great way of expressing the story loved it 5/5

laura

This is good mama, you expressed everything very well

Very good.....i like it...5/5... =)

I can feel the pain in here...the doubts and the worries. Stay strong...life is wonderful, specially if there is love to inspire you!!! God bless you!!!

-Pink Butterfly-