I think this is simply beautiful. i understand where you're coming from and i know how hard it can be when u first quit and i know its the first thing you want to do when something bad happens but the fact that you can overcome the need to cut is really good. It shows that you're stronger than that. i cant explain it so well. but this is an amazing poem.

I think this is simply beautiful. i understand where you're coming from and i know how hard it can be when u first quit and i know its the first thing you want to do when something bad happens but the fact that you can overcome the need to cut is really good. It shows that you're stronger than that. i cant explain it so well. but this is an amazing poem.

Yup yup, can totally relate to this!
Very interesting poem......
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When i was reading your poem i was thinking about myself because i have been there but see i didnt just cut i burnt myslef as well i did anything i could to try to torture myself because i felt that was what i deserved no one cared about me i have been a failure for most of my years because i am 20 and i dropped out of high school when all i needed was 3.5 credits to graduate and i work a dead end job making subs i just finaly got my license april of this year so and i grew up around violence so instead of my inflicting pain on others i did it to my self but after a while it made it so i could not feel any pain i burnt myself right over my heart and i never even flinched and im still that way to this day but i have over come the cutting the burning and trying to torture myself and now im trying to live my life to my full potential

I can really relate to this, and youve written it with such good and clear expression