Im the girl in this story and the guy is rele my bffl!!!

Thx!

I can't help but look back hearing this, we've all questioned what we call friendship, some of us just get really caught up in life as we discover our real friends- I thank you for making me look back ^_^

I'm just not too fond of your text message/ prose-ish format, I'm pretty sure that you've got something better than that ^_^

Thx....

Aww, a nice story and hope helps someone or opens up someones eyes, but I think you could go so much deeper with this or touch more hearts, because aww reading it didn't made me feel like the happiest in the world.
But people are complicated and so are relationships between them :) But a nice story remembering that you can still win being a loser. Thought never know when friendship can turn to something more.
Enjoyable and got me all thinking :) Very good material to write a poem about!
5/5 very nice theme, touching.

Aww i like it :)

WOW a story about someone else stuck in the friend zone :) I like it because I am SO experiencing that right now 5/5

WOW a story about someone else stuck in the friend zone :) I like it because I am SO experiencing that right now 5/5

Hmmm i think if you cut it up in stanzas it'd be easier to read other than that nice job... keep it up
mollie