Debbie this piece is so sad yet the way it is penned makes it such a pleasure to read. The imagery and word choices are awesome. The flow is flawless.

Stains of past to mar the ground
Emptiness devoid of sound
Frozen heart no longer feels
Numbness has become so real

This stanza moved me so much how many times I have felt this way.

Pristine lake cast so serene
Snowfall covers all obscene
Breaths of love, a final plea
Awake my love and follow me

This last verse....is the one that I like the best. It makes me feel that two lost loves come together after death.
~Clapping~
Excellent job!
Love Cindy

That was so imaginative and beautiful. The flow was so perfect in this. 5/5

Loved it... =]
such an amazing flow to the poem too..
5/5

.:H a m m y:.

Such sad words you have written here Deb...

"Blanketed by icy pearls
Adorned and crowned by fetal curls
Rosebud remnants seal the pain
Loneliness the last remains"

The whole piece is wonderful, tho i found this stanza to hit home the most.. Great job Deb :)

Thats great wording you really capture an image in this poem its really well crafted. xox sam

Sad the words you write.......your talent seems to have no limit........so beautiful the scene......but within it a dream

cos you know its not true.....
simply because......?
love is......love is you

beautifullly written poem

Deep and sad. Once again the flow is flawless. The word choice is excellent. The last 2 stanzas are my favorite and wrap this piece up well.

....this is one of the best peices of writing if read. good job.
...........7/5.....

I loved the rhyme
and the poem had so many great words to it.

OMG that was amazing!!!!
last stanza was my fav all i have to say is magnifasent!!!!! 1000/1000