That was so deep and amazing. 5/5

"capabl eof hate" ="capable of hate"

Fix that error.

Other than that, excellent poem. 5/5

<mOnStRiTo'S pRiNcEsS>

"capabl eof hate" ="capable of hate"

Fix that error.

Other than that, excellent poem. 5/5

<mOnStRiTo'S pRiNcEsS>

This I truly did love!
It was amazing, so short and simple yet it had a deep feeling to it.
The peice flowed well, and you penned it nicely.

Keep it up,
--Elly.

Ooh i loved this as well. I love how descriptive and passionate you are in your writing. It makes the poem so much more effective and interesting to read. I loved the detail in this and the imagery was great. Amazing job. 5/5