Wow, did this really happen! I dont know what to say--this makes me breathless!
nicely written

Oh woah.. that's really good. Its really short, meaningful, and wow.. you did good. 5/5

Rob,

This is a very powerful story whether it happened or not to you because in life in happens.
A goof write with good rhythm which keeps the flow throughout. There is a typo on 'there' in the 2nd stanza it should be 'their'

Take care, Em

Rob,

This is a very powerful story whether it happened or not to you because in life it happens.
A good write with good rhythm which keeps the flow throughout. There is a typo on 'there' in the 2nd stanza it should be 'their'

Take care, Em