Comments : In My City by the Sea

  • 16 years ago

    by ali

    Awww what a sweet poem, really flows well and a good selection of words, good job!!! :)
    keep it up!
    - ali x

  • 16 years ago

    by MeltInHisArms

    It's so cute! it's like wat every girl dreams of. keep up the good work.

    xoxo
    ~waiting~

  • 16 years ago

    by Alone in the crowd

    I think this is good. So keep writing.
    +_+

  • 16 years ago

    by Julie

    This poem is amzing. i mean it, it sounds like you wrote it with great passion. It show, Keep writing,

    Julie

  • 16 years ago

    by Kylie

    I really like this poem. It's seems to have a lot of feeling in it. Great work, you should definitely consider writing more.

    -Ky

  • 16 years ago

    by lisabrighteyes

    Beautifully written!
    very sweet!
    keep it up!!