Excellent job i feel the exact same way at the moment. 5/5

Such an easy piece to relate to. sometimes your flow is just a little bit off in spots, but your rhyme is always good and your message, so touching. I enjoy your work immensely!
Charisma*

Nice rhyming and flow to this very sad and questioning piece......

"Broken hearts and dreams are so over rated -
It's killing me slowly and I absolutely hate it."

^ I like this couplet....
the whole poem is filled with emotion that I'm sure we all can relate to.....thanks for entering the contest1 Great job! Take care, Debbie