i like it i gave it a 5

Wow, Dani! that was AWESOME!

You did an excellent job of description... I could feel the cold... I could here the whispers... I could taste the tears... then I realized, that they were my own tears!

Excellent!

Impecable.

Hey chick,
Omg i haven't been on this site lately but i wanted to come and visit you to see how ur work is going! It looks like it is doing wonderful<As usal> You are like one of the best writers on here that i know ur work is never bad! I can read and know it is awsome! Anyways, that poem was very meaning full! It was sad but always awaring to the people that can read it right! I like it alot! Luv ya bunches!

ALways,Lyssa

GOOD

GOOD

Wow...this was....wow!!! Great job!!! That was beyond great!!! I could feel everything and had tears in my eyes by the end!! Wonderful job!!
Amy

I'm glad I found you again Danielle.
You are a very talented writer, and I love all of your work. I hope you won't leave us again.
I love this peice. Excellente.
I have a lot of good poems to read now.
-Peace

Thank you for commenting on my poem. You are a talented writer, and I loved your poem. Keep writing, I would love to see more of your work. =) U get a 5!

Wow... Great job. I loved it ...