Comments : Christmas Love

  • 16 years ago

    by The Queen of Spades

    I rather enjoyed this poem a lot, and holiday poems are never my favorite. You used beautiful words and of course the message was lovely (it made me want a lover to have under the mistletoe this year!). The only advice I would offer is that in the beginning the word "ring" and "sing" repeated twice is a little much, but other than that great job!

  • 16 years ago

    by Daisy Wells

    Brilliant poem made me smile keep up the good work! x

  • 16 years ago

    by IllNeverBGoodEnouf

    Wow...wow...wow...super ahmazing poem i love it!5/5