Awh, i love this. It's so sweet and very heartfelt, I liked the second last line best. I felt that was very unique. You used brilliant vocabulary throughtout and the way you repeated the first line was very effective. Lovely poem. 5/5

Amazing I love it. Excellent love poem. 5/5

I like the ending lines, they're quite effective.
Whole poem is interesting, it has great flow and nice descriptions. You expressed emotions in a good way, from the beginning to the end.
Good job!

Such a sensual poem Wallace. I have been thinking, after reading the last poem i have criticized about you, I decided to add you to my favorites. If you write a new poem, I will know.

This poem, has such illuminating light of love. I have been getting such great vibrations reading your poems. I swear, speaking your words through my mouth is like warm, honey diamonds in my mouth, just oozing.

So embraceable. I am envious... so envious.

_[Deathly'Amore]