Wow waht a beautiful poem with a happy ending I trully loved it and if this is happening in reality Im trully happy for you, nice poem 5/5 maybe u can read one of mine.

Great job. I like this poem. Keep being a survivor 5/5
-vino

"Every month I would sit by the phone and checked the T.V.
Looked at all the solders who has been killed
And checked to see if your name was the one I see
Than my eyes were filled"

That stanza is the most powerful one (IMHO) and I enjoyed the story and this sweetly written poem. It's a great deal, must be 5/5 from me!!!

I love this poem
it's amazingly written and i'm glad it ends happy

5/5 defo.

Oh that was long enough and the message was really made me inspire! u really had put a real emotions and very meaninggul 5/5

The beginning starts off a little rough and all, but as I kept reading it got better and better. This is an amazing poem overall. :]

Aww wow that was Wicked Good. I honestlly thought the ending was going to different.

Loved this poem... very good words that helped see what was happening... ive actually had a family member go for military ! Its scary =D.... 5/5

Nice poem

Nice poem