Yvonne,

This poem is cute and ind of a story as well.
I hope he returned to you!

Take care,

5/5 Ingrid

This is a really good poem. It seems really young and like someone trying to get someone they love back so it's a love poem and I really do like it so good job.

-Skittlz

Oh man, that's a good poem. Seriously, it is! It feels great, not just sounds great.

It flows super well too. And it's so simple, yet not, if that made any sense at all.

BTW, I still want to read what you have of that book so far.