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OOdles man, this is dark. Very deeply disturbing images within it, nice metaphors used throughout though ..
"...staring at a shadow ,
of the man I used to be."
Not entirely sure about one word in this piece .. "woozy" I use it IRL all the time, but I'm not sure it quite fits. I would possibly look at re-wording that sentence.
It's a good piece to read as it flows nicely, regardless of the dark words contained within it.
Very dark and emotional poem, one that many poets on here can relate to. 5/5
I love this peice
its so sad.
i wish i was as good as you:]