Wow. I loved this peice. I thought it was another girl or person. But you tricked me. Lol. Great job. I liked the repitition of the line "But they'll turn their heads and look at you"

&& you swtiched it up in the third stanza so it wasn't overly repeated. If that even makes sense. Lol.The emotion was deep and the flow was flawless. Great job!
5/5

Amber...

Awwww
okay acting like a reader not ur bff soooooo...

this is sooo sad but still really good i bet lots of other girls feel that when peeps compare their older siblings or favor the yougner one but i bet 20 years from now u will be all ur sis is and people will look at u not her<333

okay but yeah u no i luv u and lacey but ur not FAT so get that outta ur head ur like me and everyone tells me im skinny so uh hello u r 2 and any one who calls u fat is jelous cuz ur better and popularer or w.e lol XOXO

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Awwww
okay acting like a reader not ur bff soooooo...

this is sooo sad but still really good i bet lots of other girls feel that when peeps compare their older siblings or favor the yougner one but i bet 20 years from now u will be all ur sis is and people will look at u not her<333

okay but yeah u no i luv u and lacey but ur not FAT so get that outta ur head ur like me and everyone tells me im skinny so uh hello u r 2 and any one who calls u fat is jelous cuz ur better and popularer or w.e lol XOXO

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