Comments : My Captivated Heart Will Not Stay Still.

  • 16 years ago

    by Teria

    Awhile..just -- awhile . . . just.

    mkay, darling.
    I LOVED IT.
    this is where you did a wonderful job with the long lines.
    Not that you didn't before.
    But, these seemed to flow a bit better.
    Plus, I just love it.
    I like wanted to highlight the whole poem and paste it and .. . like put " BEST PART **"
    haha.

    mkay.
    wonderful job.
    5.5

  • 16 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    I know I'd do absolutely anything for the one I love, and I now know that you would do the same, and thats how it should be. I just hope that they return the unconditional love you have given them, for you truly deserve it. 5/5 as always it's an easy decision when reading your work. Take Care GG23

  • 16 years ago

    by Blissful

    Another beautiful love poem. Your title was amazing and the poem was flawless. The emotions were real and the descriptions of why you love this person were clear and sweet. Beautifully done. *5/5*

  • 16 years ago

    by Christina

    Another great poem....although it seems that every poem i read is all on the same topic....and i do kinda the same thing...but i noticed you mentioned somethen like that to me and i was bring it to your atention that you kinda do the same thing and i dont think it wrong im just sayen it!! but great poem!! keep it up!

    <3 i love you silly