Comments : Poetic sex

  • 16 years ago

    by nering

    Love it--very funny! great job

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    I can't express how much I like this. Whole piece is brilliant and excellently written. Short lines are very effective, they gave specific rhythm to the poem.
    This piece left huge impression on me. I'm amazed with your talent and creativity!
    Uniqueness shine from every flawless line of this poem.
    Greatly done!
    Keep writing!