Hazel colored eyes that haunt
my every dream both day and night
^^ i really loved how you worded that specifically it is very refreshing to read poetry with symbolism, imagery, personification and other literary elements in it used so fragily and perfectly

very very good job : ) 5.5

A lovely sweet poem of longing, and mildly sensual as well. well done

Grant

Mmm, intresting saying in theis poem simple and yet deep in meaning !!!

i think you expressed well your emotionsa dn your questions , and your hopes,

i can relate to some , of the events you spoken off

i think it is a very good poem to share

great one

Thanx 4the comment ^_^
"just me, your little girl and you" is what i like most in this poem.. It's very well expressed..
5/5

I wish that your wish came true
well done i like it