Really good, I love the shakespeare language that you put into it, a really nice piece. Good job.

Amazing poem, Wallace, you write truly excellent love poetry. I like everything about this piece: Your choice of words is great and you created so original and captivating atmosphere through the piece. The flow of the whole poem is flawless.
You also expressed emotions is a great way.
My favorite stanza is;

-Enticing oblivion upon charming piety
Lusted with greed, 'gainst harmful decree
O' father of just, such perilous lies
From a lover without, two virtuous eyes-

Well done!
5/5

Ahh this was just beautiful. It flowed off the tongue so naturally and flawlessly that it was a joy to read. The words you used were captivating and congrats on writing in a style many find difficult. Good luck in the contest! Well done *5/5*