Wow...
This is amazing, truly amazing!
Whole piece is endlessly powerful, with excellently expressed emotions and imagery in which I could drown.
I can relate to this piece in a way.
Fantastically done!

"Music of clashing emotions, the man I was, the creature I am."

This is my favorite line. I love the words you use in your writing; amazing imagery.

It's been a while, I hope you're ok!
This is once again an amazingly powerful poem.
the chosen words seem right, you can feel pain reading this.
You are amazing, talented!

sincerely,
~* Natasha *~

Amazing write!
i loved every word choice.
great job.
keep it up!
-Lisa

"Once was I, despite the mists of terror, many things of love and hope.

Now this shadow of the broken, memories of the dark blending into pale hurtful present.

Black fairy tales once believed in. Love, happiness, the good of man. "

Those are my favorite lines!
Once again, you've caught my attention and my heart strings. (if that makes sense)
Everything you write is like A code that you can only really understand if you've gone through something similar otherwise like MissMasoKissed said, you'd have to sit down and take the time to decipher it.
5/5
Keep writing, please!

~Ally

Wow this is a great poem!!!!
Full of the deepest emotions of a lonesome heart.

Wow this is a great poem!!!!
Full of the deepest emotions of a lonesome heart.

This one captivated me...I was lost in the poem....please keep writing...simply beautiful...