Hey your poem is great it is so powerful, short but meaningful. I love the line no lies, no spies, just peace, it is sot the truth. 5/5

Nice
Sorry im not writing much because I'm starting to fall asleep...
5/5
~ally

Wow.
That's really good.
I think the rhyming was a bit well. . . cheesy. . here adn there.
But, it's a great poem, don't get me wrong.

Keep it up.

Wow. its amazing. i loved it. great job! 5/5. ur an amazing poet. keep up the great work.

yours always
oxoxLIKETHEWINDxoxo

I really like tis one josh

Okay joshua ur sooo a better writter than me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Hey this poem is great too! It gave me a feeling of relaxation when i started to read it! You really do have a talent there...keep up the great work!

"Take it through the veins of filled with blood.
The blood of a combination of truth and love. " Those lines were the higlight of this poem. Loved it very much for many reasons and for it being meaningful. Well written. 5/5

:-)

Well Hey, I love the word choice and how you put it together. You have amazing style in all of your poems. I cive it a 5/5 and I hope to talk to you more about it.
~Ellen~