Sweet, short poem. I like it. The first stanza is the best, the beginning is really lovely.
As I sit,
I think of you.
Jup, nice.

Wow! I just couldn't take my eyes off because this was so beautiful and the way it was written just flowed with passion. 5/5

I liiek is and i love the flow of the poem....keep up the GR3AT work!

This is realllyyyyyy cute!! i like this one a lot!! i really like the flow of it =]