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  • 16 years ago

    by kaida clover

    Good work.. u did well portraying the emotions u were feeling.. its sad but a truthful portrayal on life

  • 16 years ago

    by Woe

    Aww..
    this sounds like.. like... like a potential breakup song... lol. i like it. 5/5 <3

  • 16 years ago

    by Beyond Repair

    I like it, Maybe its just my style but I would put after "So don't try to save it" something that goes with with gone, maybe "Just leave it alone." Thats just me though. Its still great as is. Another great one, Keep up the good work. ~Zach

  • 16 years ago

    by Miu

    Ahh Brilliant, I so loved this, streight to point easy to read and showing ur attitude a bit. And very easy to connect to. Emotions so strong.
    Amazing! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Pink Romance

    Excellent! it was so straight forward and i have to say i like beating around the bush sometimes, but beautiful.

    nice keep up the work. =)

    thank you for reading my poetry too. i like think your awsome cause you kno wat to say and how to say it!.

    take care!

  • 16 years ago

    by Pink Romance

    I read this poem alredy but i had to read about it agian... lol! this poem... hehehehe!

    wat i ment to say was that you dont seem like the type to be in a really bad relationship problem..

  • 15 years ago

    by Prasad Baadkar

    Goooood wordz ....this worked..... to be so nice