Comments : I've Got A Fear Of Flying

  • 16 years ago

    by KJ

    Hmmm...very nice poem. I loved it.

    PaSsIoNaTe kIsSeS

  • 16 years ago

    by TRAGiC BEAUTY

    Aw!
    This is so super sweet :D
    The second I started reading it, I was like, wow, she's outdone herself.

    And the idea of this was like, perfect.
    Amazing job on this one :D

    ShelbyShortcake.

  • 16 years ago

    by HaileyHelen

    This was cute! i think that it was beautifully written and it posseses a sort of elegance to the words!

  • 16 years ago

    by Blissful

    Oh what a beautifully amazing ending. It just left me with a smile and saying "aww..." I loved the happy ending here ... sometimes the scars of a past love still linger on your heart and youre afraid to opens its doors once again but sometimes you can miss on a lot of things. But the person that breaks down the barrier, is the person that deserves your heart.

    Well done *5/5*

  • 16 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    Definately another wonderful piece, the word choice and vocab as always were great. We all have fears and a lot of us have the same fear when it comes to love, but the only way to be truly happy is to open yourself up to the risk of heartache. amazing as always 5/5 GG23

  • 16 years ago

    by Teria

    Awh.
    That's sweet, and I love it. (:
    You're such a great poet.
    I enjoy reading your poems.
    Actually, I love reading them.
    I look forward to them. (:
    Lol.

    Keep it uphun.

  • 16 years ago

    by Red CSIII

    Precious ^_^

    A little repetitive, but that added a fistload magic to it ^_^

    Obviously it made me smile, thanks for that random friend from the forums ^_^

    I'll be sure to check out some of your more recent stuff 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by The Queen of Spades

    You definitely have a way with words. I particularly loved the line "I've got a fear of flying and sweetie you make me soar," It's a lovely paraodox that fits in nicely with the piece. Great piece 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Brittany

    AMAZING. I LOVE THIS.
    I love the use of something solid like a fear of flying can be connected to being loved. It's so inspirational. This made me smile, and it was just so beautiful and full of emotion. You are VERY talented.
    5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by Cheyanne

    Awww this was an incredible poem.....the ending was just so amazinly sweet....beautifully written 5/5:)

  • 16 years ago

    by A Phoenyx in Flight

    Wow i like this poem it is soooo sweet. you did a nice job