Comments : Reality

  • 19 years ago

    by Sean Allen

    "There emotions all for show" should be "their"

    "Please don’t ask our saviour?
    For, lord he’s sure to know?" I don't really understand this. The second line certainly shouldn't be a question, but the first is continued on the second, so the first shouldn't have a question mark either.

    I liked this poem overall, and my favorite part is about the government, it reminds me of a poem I wrote...I just can't remember what it is called.

  • 19 years ago

    by Dani Ward

    very nice