Comments : He's Breaking

  • 16 years ago

    by Abu3li

    So sad

  • 16 years ago

    by Victoria Rainey

    Omg... I totally love your poem because it soo ... unexplainable.. the good sentence fluency, the good choices of words....the mood.. the settings... amazing....you are a good writer... and I hope you really know that deep down in your heart, and you will keep on writing... keep it up with the amzing job you have done!