Comments : Save those being killed

  • 16 years ago

    by Stephanie

    Oh my.... Wow.
    I love this, I truly do. The emotions were strong and the flow was flawless. Everything about it was fantastic. This poem made me think quite a bit. :] A marvelous write.

    "Sinful thoughts occupy my mind,
    Visions confine me in distress.
    Regrets I'm trying to leave behind,
    Remind me that my life's a mess."

    ^^^ I <33 those lines. Simply amazing. Overall: 5.5

    -- Steph. <3