I really like this one. There is so much truth in it, sometimes you really have to push yourself to look forward and ask yourself the hard questions. It hurts now but is it going to matter later? The only thing I would work on is the flow of your work. JUst as an example I reworked the first stanza of this piece. I hope it is helpful. Overall nice work again.

Right now it seems so hard
And it's tearing me apart.
Making me question everything
You've done to my poor heart.