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This was so terribly beautiful, m'dear. It truly is. The emotions were heartbreaking and sadness leaked through every word. The flow was flawless, there was never a break in the poem. And overall, you did a spectacular job! :]] Overall: 5.5

"When you call I tell them to answer, say I'm not home,
[I can't bear the image of you smiling on the other line]"
^^ Oh wow. Those lines were amazing! :) Fantastic job, m'dear.

-- Steph <33

Emotions really came through the words and i think that was what made the poem so great!

OH MY ... this was just wonderful! Each word you spoke had me nodding because I related with everything you said. The emotions you spoke of where once I am quite familiar with.

"I dial your number just to hang up the phone..."
^oh I have done that too many times ...

"I want to capture your heart & make it mine again]
They thought I would've given up by now"
^oh yeah girl, I know exactly what you're ssaying here .. sometimes when you truly love someoe, its hard to give up hope and you wish one day they would come back to you.

Well done *5/5*

I'm amazed by the quality of your words, I just didn't think you would be able to relate to me in a such a way. Once again a love poem that all can relate to and you've written it so young. I'm speechless so it's a good thing I can type these comments. It's so true that when you have a broken heart, you'll cling to anything that takes the pain away. Amazing once again 5/5 GG23 your favourited after 2 reads :)

I love that poem.
HOnestly, when I read it I was like. . . I'm gonna love this.
But, I love it more than I thought I would. I can honestly relate. (:

You did a wonderful job.
one of your bes, I believe. (:
5.5

Beautifully written! I loved the ending. Heartfelt and sad. It flows well too. <3

"I listen to your words & memories come rushing back,
You tell me all the words my heart [long] to hear...
I pray you're not telling me lies- then again-
My heart will fall for just about anything these days."

you have no idea how well i can relate to this.....very much i loved how you worded everything the flow was great!! 5/5

laura

I love the feeling and emotion you put into this. it kinda makes me sad though, but then again it must be a good poem to get me to feel what your triyng to express :) great job, loved it!

This was an awesome poem I loved it. I could feel the pain in your words. I could relate to it. Very nice

This is unexplainable. It's beautiful to show how someone can be so hurt, but sometimes in the presence of love, one is weak. Your word choice was good and I could totally relate to this piece.
Well done.
5/5.

That was greatt<3 trulyy touchingg!

Ur poem is really good :)

Wow another great poem.......and i can relate!!! im giving you 5/5 not to be niice but because you deserve it!!! keep up the great work!!

<3 i love you silly

Wow.. another spectacular poem.. the only part i didn't like was the part about the world that stopped spinning.. its a bit cliche...but i really like your style of writing, though i don't understand the use of the parentheses..

Omg thats sad but cute LOL i love it I'm voting !!

This poems is amaazzing..it's breath taking and it has so much emotion..this is probably one of the best poems i've read on this site...i absolutely love it! <3